WitD 14: Your move

Whispers in the Dark
_{a Great Mouse Detective fanfiction}

<sub>Chapter 14 | Your move

illustrations.: prologue | 01 | 02 | 03 | 04 | 05 | 06 | 07 | 08 | 09 | 10 | 11 | 12 | 13 | 14...
the chapters: prologue | 01 | 02 | 03 | 04 | 05 | 06 | 07 | 08 | 09 | 10 | 11 | 12 | 13 | 14... (to be continued)

summary: AU - None believed that the hate-filled words of a little girl could still live on after more then 200 years, but when strange events start occurring in London the city's only hope of survival lies with one mouse ... and a rat?</sub>

OMG! Heaven help us! I updated! - AND pleased with this

After such a long hiatus from art and almost everything else beside sleep, I am happy to bring you THIS! *yay for dorkish me! XD*

Thanks to the wonderful people who left a review with a suggestion for chapter 14's illustration, I actually unlazied myself and drew our favorite impossible-to-get-along-ithouth-sustaining-injury duo - Basil and Ratigan... PLAYING CHESS IN COOKIE'S KITCHEN! (who is a very lazy mole judging by the pile of plates on the counter ... well, at least the table looks clean) And lookie! Wood looks like wood! Thinker came back in the form of a hat! And Ratigan looks more like him then a hieroglyph! And I am hyper tonight

Oh, ignore the rambling up there XD On a more serious note, I'm happy to be done with this. Although Ratigan's hands seem to be... wrong and Thinker can't seem to be keeping a steady size in my drawings, I am overall pleased with this one. Although the first two sketches for this one didn't seem right, I think some strange wish to try and doodle in SAI did the trick :3 It literally came flowing out! And I could even save paper! I LOVE SAI!!!! (only downside to this was that for some reason it didn't save right the first time and I had to re-do the whole sketch X( )

So - comments on the pic, comments on the chapter, silly chatter, critique (I WOULD LOVE YOU FOREVER!) ... anything would be welcome

Peace!



artwork and story © Jessica P. (2010)
Basil of Baker Street/The Great Mouse Detective © Eve Titus/Disney
please do not use without permission